Week 9: 7. Johnathan Mercy (1-0) vs. 8. Zombie (1-0) \\ Zombie wins 6-4

e11even · 04-28-2014, 02:32 AM

John- This verse was a technical powerhouse. You vocab was pretty dope too, as youheaved an onslought imagery that, though it sounded good, didn't really feel connected to me. I feel like the insides of this gut were all aligned, but were not organic(there was no real substance) to it.

Zombie- Immaculately written and incredibly imaginative. You encompased everything that can really be asked for in a verse at first glance. Your imagery, technical ability and knack for total polish is dope. I think it would take an immense amount of skill to overcome your displays.

MVGT Zombie for an overall more enjoyable well written drop. Good job to both you guys. Great reads.

04-28-2014, 02:32 AM	#11
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	John- This verse was a technical powerhouse. You vocab was pretty dope too, as youheaved an onslought imagery that, though it sounded good, didn't really feel connected to me. I feel like the insides of this gut were all aligned, but were not organic(there was no real substance) to it. Zombie- Immaculately written and incredibly imaginative. You encompased everything that can really be asked for in a verse at first glance. Your imagery, technical ability and knack for total polish is dope. I think it would take an immense amount of skill to overcome your displays. MVGT Zombie for an overall more enjoyable well written drop. Good job to both you guys. Great reads. __________________ Ahem.

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