I don't want to fight

Primeval Martyr · 04-19-2014, 07:58 PM

I think with 7k+ posts, you might be getting bored with hip-hop. I don't know if you've experimented with spoken word or poetry, but you certainly should.

The piece is amazing; explores in-depth concepts, uses a stunning vocabulary, a creative and tight flow, impressive rhymes and rhyme scheme, and none of it feels forced at all, it comes through very naturally. It has the well-polished feel of professional work. I think only occasionally did a line seem forced or amateurish; the opening two lines almost made me turn back, and "punk with a pout" made me roll my eyes a little, but all around very interesting read.

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04-19-2014, 07:58 PM	#7
Primeval Martyr Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2014 Location: L.A. Posts: 5 Rep Power: 0	I think with 7k+ posts, you might be getting bored with hip-hop. I don't know if you've experimented with spoken word or poetry, but you certainly should. The piece is amazing; explores in-depth concepts, uses a stunning vocabulary, a creative and tight flow, impressive rhymes and rhyme scheme, and none of it feels forced at all, it comes through very naturally. It has the well-polished feel of professional work. I think only occasionally did a line seem forced or amateurish; the opening two lines almost made me turn back, and "punk with a pout" made me roll my eyes a little, but all around very interesting read.