Week 7: Certain (0-0) vs. rhetoric (0-0) \\ Certain wins 5-3

MMLP · 04-11-2014, 03:33 PM

first time voting..... both were good reads tbf.

rhetoric your story was really good, wasn't as skilful in lyricism as I usually prefer but the concept, storytelling leading to the twist was good.

but certain's verse, it was crafted so well, really condensed compared to rhetoric's and yet more effective, more in skilled in its explanatory in my opinion, choice of wording and range of vocabulary tipped it for me.

Enjoyed the battle

v/Certain

04-11-2014, 03:33 PM	#7
MMLP Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 614 Battle Record: 15-16 Champed - Write Week 9 Rep Power: 9768091	first time voting..... both were good reads tbf. rhetoric your story was really good, wasn't as skilful in lyricism as I usually prefer but the concept, storytelling leading to the twist was good. but certain's verse, it was crafted so well, really condensed compared to rhetoric's and yet more effective, more in skilled in its explanatory in my opinion, choice of wording and range of vocabulary tipped it for me. Enjoyed the battle v/Certain Last edited by MMLP; 04-11-2014 at 03:38 PM.

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