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Join Date: Apr 2014
Location: L.A.
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It's not amazing, but it's fun and certainly shows potential. You have an understanding of the basics of writing rap, and could probably out-rap your friends and acquaintances. I suggest lurking around a little, I'm confident you could improve by leaps and bounds. Please don't use paragraph form, it's very hard to review.
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