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Old 03-18-2013, 09:41 AM   #9
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outstanding match.

i read both verse throughly and a couple of times each. zygote has that smart verfy clever yet almost professor like feel to the
way he uses his words. great imagery and the tone was outstanding tbh

Quote:
Artificial intelligence programmed with man’s original principles kept,
But A.I.’s could self-replicate and overcome their primitive specs to create a rippling effect,
that shit there was sick man. the depth and imagery to that line speaks volumes to the skill set you showcased.
and to be honest the entire verse is scattered with these types of thought provoking, interesting lines. got a bit
preachy but hey..that just me being picky...great verse.

frank.

you took a diffefrent approuch to creating your story where as zy came with a bit more of a narrative tone...you went in
on your characters and developed a really cool story for your character to shine through..thus giving me more appreciation
to the story you crafted. seems like you like to write in that loose language...like i dunno how to explain it...you have the ability
to write with humor and a laid back type of feel...like that aspect of your writing..id like to think that you dont take yourself
so serious..which is something i can relate to...great piece man.

overall..

i think i got zygote taking this...i thought his piece overall was a bit better for my taste..he had alot of thought provoking lines
i found interesting..tbh frank dropped a piece that was ill ass fuck..so its not like zygote wrote a doper verse...its just my personal
choice to vote for zygote this week...his piece captured me a bit more...great battle.
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