Week 4: YDK (2-1) vs. Adonis (2-1) \\ YDK wins 5-3

e11even · 03-24-2014, 03:05 AM

Adonis- This was a cool piece after the first stanza. I feel like more could have openly related to the topic. This felt like an AOWL anthem, or an ode or something. I dug it, but on the face of it, it seemed like it was missing that enthralling factor.

YDK- Wow. This was straight forward, emotional, gripping and awesomely fucked up all at once. I really have no complaints about this other than it felt a little too brief. This didn't NEED more, but expansive stories are kinda what I'm used to. Great job delivering such a large dose in so little bars. Good Job.

I think this one came down to who was present. YDK definitely showed up and dropped a solid work with all the nooks and crannies that make a verse memorable. No explosive vocab or high level rhyming, but the heart of this piece pumped life. MVGT YDK

03-24-2014, 03:05 AM	#12
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	Adonis- This was a cool piece after the first stanza. I feel like more could have openly related to the topic. This felt like an AOWL anthem, or an ode or something. I dug it, but on the face of it, it seemed like it was missing that enthralling factor. YDK- Wow. This was straight forward, emotional, gripping and awesomely fucked up all at once. I really have no complaints about this other than it felt a little too brief. This didn't NEED more, but expansive stories are kinda what I'm used to. Great job delivering such a large dose in so little bars. Good Job. I think this one came down to who was present. YDK definitely showed up and dropped a solid work with all the nooks and crannies that make a verse memorable. No explosive vocab or high level rhyming, but the heart of this piece pumped life. MVGT YDK __________________ Ahem.

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