Week 4: timeless (2-1) vs. ZYG (2-1) \\ ZYG wins 6-0

YDK · 03-24-2014, 12:59 AM

Zyg you had a dope and original verse my dude. flowed amazingly and the philosopher references and storyline was a nice take on the topic.
Timeless you had an awesome flow as well along with a cool story but the one drawback was the quotes. It's always hard to write quotes in a verse that rhymes that sound like its something somebody would actually say, and I felt that you lacked in that department this week. everything other than that was awesome tho bro.
dope battle fellas but I gotta give my vote to zyg for the more polished verse

03-24-2014, 12:59 AM	#7
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181113	Zyg you had a dope and original verse my dude. flowed amazingly and the philosopher references and storyline was a nice take on the topic. Timeless you had an awesome flow as well along with a cool story but the one drawback was the quotes. It's always hard to write quotes in a verse that rhymes that sound like its something somebody would actually say, and I felt that you lacked in that department this week. everything other than that was awesome tho bro. dope battle fellas but I gotta give my vote to zyg for the more polished verse __________________

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