AOWL Week 5: Red glare (2-1) VS. Zenland (2-2) OPEN FOR VOTES!!!

[PancakeBrah]

I've got Red Glare, reluctantly, because he's a fuck.

Both were nice. different tacts. Red Glare was a Black-based flow. I try to reference Black/dead man in every review because 1) he's real good and 2) i have a writer/man crush on him. it's cool. I'm pretty sure he knows. anyhoo, red glare has the whole black thing going on. lots of comas and periods to indicate stops which tricks the reader into evaluating single words/phrases and thinking they mean more than they do. it's a strong way to write. and he did it really well. really well. problem is, he took a faggot route on the topic. but it's a good verse. zenland wrote longer form sentences. which need to have dope personal relation or great fundamentals to work, in which he was hit or miss. he related to the topic better. but red glare faggot'd his way into the topic well enough to make his better verse get the vote.

i like alienating both people in a battle.