Week 2: Diode (1-0) vs. Adonis (1-0) \\ Adonis wins 9-7

[King Ra.]

Adonis, I don't kniw how you came about the direction you decided to take, but I must say, I came away very impressed. You tapped into what you do best, with your poetic-like touch which was dead on from start to finish. What comes along with that is great description and an essential flow which never slipped. While it may come to many as a piece which lacks any impact, this piece was a very creative take on the topic. Very well done. Diode, you have a natural way of writing, simple approach but well written. Your take on the topic wasn't unique/creative but you put it together well with very little, if none error. I would have to say though, you could have been a bit more creative or more in-depth because your piece seems to lack that kick to draw me in.

With that said, I feel Diode missed out on a chance to take this one because Adonis took a sort of weird approach, one which Diode could've capitalized on if he sprinkled somethung more entertaining and fresh. Adonis approach was risky, but he wrote very well, had a unique take and imo, steals this one.

MVGT: Adonis.