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Old 03-02-2014, 09:24 PM   #1
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Sacrifice: Damn...you came out crazy in the beginning section. That rhyme scheme is dope and the flow is on fucking point. I felt a few of your lines were stretched but im a big fan of your scheme. I just feel your verse is kind of all over the place concept wise tho. some parts were hard to follow I had to re read this a few time. but overall this was a dope verse and I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

Frank: WOW! I was a huge fan of this verse. I loved the way you took to the topic. You were very descriptive with your words in such a way it was like I could totally paint the picture in my head of exactly what you were saying. Altho some of your lines were stretched and could of been worded better this was a nice fucking verse. Altho I do hate the Yankees...METS ALL DAY!

MVGT: Frank...seriously a close battle I just thought the way frank described everything was a bit more clearer. Really nice battle fellas
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