Week 1: Objective vs. Just Write \\ Just Write wins 6-0

zygote · 03-02-2014, 07:22 AM

Just Write, some grasp of deeper themes and a good display of fundamentals. Enjoyed it but it felt a little uninspired, kind of going through the motions of the the plot progression rather than being a driving force, perhaps the 'reliving memories' style of writing past-tense contributed to that.

Objective, enjoyed it a lot, laughed at this med intellektuell part, didn't want to translate it, but the visual appearance of the Nordic languages with all the crossed O's and circles on top is funny. Actually, enjoyed the whole first two parts direction but you lost it by directly referencing the users on this website at the end, too self-referential came across a little bit corny. Voting for Just Write.

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03-02-2014, 07:22 AM	#8
zygote Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 501 Battle Record: 33-12 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Art of Writing League (3x) Rep Power: 737828	Just Write, some grasp of deeper themes and a good display of fundamentals. Enjoyed it but it felt a little uninspired, kind of going through the motions of the the plot progression rather than being a driving force, perhaps the 'reliving memories' style of writing past-tense contributed to that. Objective, enjoyed it a lot, laughed at this med intellektuell part, didn't want to translate it, but the visual appearance of the Nordic languages with all the crossed O's and circles on top is funny. Actually, enjoyed the whole first two parts direction but you lost it by directly referencing the users on this website at the end, too self-referential came across a little bit corny. Voting for Just Write.