Week 1: Vulgar vs. King Ra. \\ Vulgar wins 5-0

[Just Write]

Man i fed this shit and pressed enter on my phone in a dead area and it didnt load. Then i went to press refresh and it deleted my feed. Lets try this again.

Vulgar,
I always know im going to entertained reading your verses, this one was no different. The description was veautiful as was the intellectual venacular. The mechanical urinary track made me lolz. A very strong verse for week one. Props


King mu'fuckin raw,
i really enjoyed this piece but it didnt feel complete. I didn't click the link because i feel thats almost cheating because if i add that to this piece it exceeds the limit and what not. I love your storytelling abilities and when you actually write a full piece they are always spectacular. Despite that i think this still would have won in a lot of battles but i don't think it was enough facing an opponent like vulgar.


Mvgt=vulgar
Great read guys