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03-13-2013, 06:33 PM
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loose leaf bruce lee
Join Date: Mar 2013
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Yeah i liked this also. Loads of potential with your writing style as well. Lots of clever lines. I just would like to see some internals. The multies were decent. Try fuckin with different syllable counts on em. Thats my 2 cents. Good stuff though.. Rise bruh
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