AOWL Week 4: Vinzr (1-0) VS. TYSON (1-1) [VINZR WINS, 4-2.]

Mac · 03-11-2013, 09:11 PM

vinzr
dope vocab and flow. actually flowed very nice wit the beat. the descriptions of the scene were smooth and cool. somehow i thought its about cowboys and shit since i've been lately playing that type of games lol. nice verse even though its short, portrayed a cool image.

tyson
here we got a cool concept. scene transitions werent really smooth they were abit dodgy, considering its a small verse i didnt get lost and continued. last lines had a nice poetic touch overall a decent verse.

im giving my vote to vinzr for better vocab, flow and story. this was a short battle but a decent one. nice job fellas

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03-11-2013, 09:11 PM	#14
Mac Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 480 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 1856622	vinzr dope vocab and flow. actually flowed very nice wit the beat. the descriptions of the scene were smooth and cool. somehow i thought its about cowboys and shit since i've been lately playing that type of games lol. nice verse even though its short, portrayed a cool image. tyson here we got a cool concept. scene transitions werent really smooth they were abit dodgy, considering its a small verse i didnt get lost and continued. last lines had a nice poetic touch overall a decent verse. im giving my vote to vinzr for better vocab, flow and story. this was a short battle but a decent one. nice job fellas