ayo...so....went out the other nite....

[Ghost1]

Originally Posted by ...the Munster

10/10? no sir

I give this story a B- for the parts that were capped out

Were those the only parts u read? Lol.

I admit this was a bit longwinded.....still trying to hone my craft here guys.

[namix]

Originally Posted by Bags

Were those the only parts u read? Lol.

I admit this was a bit longwinded.....still trying to hone my craft here guys.

they are judging the story teller, not the story.

you never claimed to be a storyteller yo, you have good stories.


three separate ellipses in a title, as well as the words "ayo...", "so...", and "went out the other nite...", in my humble opinion, give you a get out of jail** card for being judged on storytelling length ;p



im long winded as fuck, clearly, so just defending you in a long winded fashion