AOWL Week 4: bleak (0-1) VS. Zenland (1-2) [ZENLAND WINS, 5-3.]

[Split]

Zen

I find it it funny you couldn't hear the beat, but wrote lines that flowed perfectly over it. Message was nice and refreshingly presented like

They can't feed us, That shit's a chore, but they need us to get their force
To get sent to wars on two trips and tours without mentioning what for,
Thousands lifeless and you wonder why it's like this, What's rich without poor?

Word. I thought the longer lines fit your style really well and came off smooth no stutters


Bleak

This was real. Cool key style to match the song, flowed easy with some nice vocab and phrasings that seem unique.

V/ZenLand. Both were enjoyable reads but Zen had the more directed and fully fleshed out verse, that made it feel mor like a piece, an had a bigger impact, and felt less like a X Line Keystyle