Uhuh

[Clayray]

You had nice Multi's throughout, nice flow to it as well. The intro was the best part for me

Originally Posted by Exis

I'll have your jaw a crackin' 'fore you've stepped to test me
should've grown a set of testes
'fore that thought had happened
or atleast pretend your deadly like this forums baddest
manufactured poorly,
you's an assembled dead beat in the purest form of wackness.

^^ this was good as well. Overall a pretty solid piece.

Keep writing man!

Peace.