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Old 01-23-2014, 08:19 PM   #1
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Feeding the audio.

Hate the beat. It sounds like a rejected late-era Eminem beat. The chorus sounds like late-era Eminem. The first verse cool. The second verse a lot better. The lyricism throughout was cool but it gets kind of drowned out, a little. If that makes sense. Delivery was really good, though. Delivery and flow were the best aspects of this, lyrics were dope but they weren't accentuated.
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Feeding the audio.

Hate the beat. It sounds like a rejected late-era Eminem beat. The chorus sounds like late-era Eminem. The first verse cool. The second verse a lot better. The lyricism throughout was cool but it gets kind of drowned out, a little. If that makes sense. Delivery was really good, though. Delivery and flow were the best aspects of this, lyrics were dope but they weren't accentuated.
Thanks for the feed on the beat. I'm still in the mixing stage and re-mixing stage with all of my beats, so I definitely will take your comments into consideration. The final will probably be something similar, but I am looking to make it stand out more.
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