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03-08-2013, 01:44 PM
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yeet
Join Date: Mar 1993
Posts: 3,956
Battle Record: 20-34
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Mac n B, Wrath of the Math
Nothing spectacular but a steady verse throughout. vs. Nothing Sun ray could have been flipped better, most of your punches were statements. Keep it simple and let your concept do the work. You still have a ways to go, but you get the idea. V/Rayge
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