AOWL Week 4: Pryde (0-0) VS. Adonis (0-0) [ADONIS WINS, 7-0.]

Zen · 03-08-2013, 01:00 PM

Good job showing for your first week fellas.

Adonis: Dope verse truly. The verse literally got better the further it went into it until the end to me was a little blah imo. But all in all I see you've got some real talent man. You really showcased that around the Randy Moss lines that was just a sick flow you had there forreal. Props this week.
Pryde: This verse seemed to me from the start to have the flow a little fucked up. Some of the lines were long winded as hell and your verse suffered for it imo. Some of the lines just seemed like you weren't even trying like the niggas is lame niggas is tame line. Maybe that's just me but I felt like you didn't come with everything you had.

Overall both guys went in the same direction with this topic, but imo Adonis had the better take on the topic.

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03-08-2013, 01:00 PM	#9
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Good job showing for your first week fellas. Adonis: Dope verse truly. The verse literally got better the further it went into it until the end to me was a little blah imo. But all in all I see you've got some real talent man. You really showcased that around the Randy Moss lines that was just a sick flow you had there forreal. Props this week. Pryde: This verse seemed to me from the start to have the flow a little fucked up. Some of the lines were long winded as hell and your verse suffered for it imo. Some of the lines just seemed like you weren't even trying like the niggas is lame niggas is tame line. Maybe that's just me but I felt like you didn't come with everything you had. Overall both guys went in the same direction with this topic, but imo Adonis had the better take on the topic.