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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
Battle Record: 35-45
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This was an i.teresting battle
never got into both readers before really trap seems new to me reminds me of southern rap copy seems obsessed with structure & multis too often but I must say that trap did not disappointment due to my judgments on his name he seemed to capture a glimmering idea as easily as...well a snare would a small animal quite an interesting read to say the least. the way that you brought the piece together was an interesting take on things very nicely done. i will have to read more from you. Copy on the other hand stepped out of his comfort zone slightly and I must say he brought some energy unseen from previous work I'm unsure if he's elevating to levels I have not seen from him or he is just pulling a cover over everyone's eyes masking his true talents regardless the flow of his piece went well with the topic at hand and brought a breath of fresh. air to the norm nicely done as far as my vote goes I feel that trap edged it out with a different yet coherent piece. not saying I didn't enjoy or not understand Copys verse. I just felt. trap was more comfortable he also had a stronger stride toward the end. nice battle fellas
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