ROUND ONE: (7)Lars vs. (26)Objective - (LARS WINS 5-0)

NYCSPITZ · 01-15-2014, 11:55 AM

Cool battle guys. I can see the creative juices were flowing for both of you, good shit. Lars opened with veteran presence and strong imagery/rhyme ability to pull in the reader in. Throughout his laconic style was emphatic, witty and to the point. Objective went a little more abstract in his phrasing but basically in about 1000 years a young iranian orphan rises to leader during WW3 as America falls. Creative and one of the better offerings from you. Technically I enjoyed Lars more and conceptually I thought his was more to the point. Objective had some great concepts and came with a dope verse but I thought Lars' was the better piece of writing. Thanks to both, good luck

V/ Lars

01-15-2014, 11:55 AM	#1
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	Cool battle guys. I can see the creative juices were flowing for both of you, good shit. Lars opened with veteran presence and strong imagery/rhyme ability to pull in the reader in. Throughout his laconic style was emphatic, witty and to the point. Objective went a little more abstract in his phrasing but basically in about 1000 years a young iranian orphan rises to leader during WW3 as America falls. Creative and one of the better offerings from you. Technically I enjoyed Lars more and conceptually I thought his was more to the point. Objective had some great concepts and came with a dope verse but I thought Lars' was the better piece of writing. Thanks to both, good luck V/ Lars __________________ UNIFIED THEORY

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