FINAL: Allen Knight vs. oats - OATS WINS 6-3

Certain · 01-13-2014, 11:52 PM

oats: Your opener was very good and had me thinking you might pull the upset. But then the rest of your verse was much weaker. The sitting on coach play was OK at best. The straightforward disses weren't personal. The closer was OK but generic.

Allen Knight: The Tony Parker line slayed me, especially since the Spurs' system is nicknamed "48 Minutes of Hell." The Hall & Oats line was OK at best, but it was a good concept that needed further exploration. The opener and closer were your weakest lines, which I can't remember ever seeing in a verse, but that's what happens in a keystyle. You left the door open for oats, but the Tony Parker line really connected for me.

Vote: Allen Knight

01-13-2014, 11:52 PM	#9
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	oats: Your opener was very good and had me thinking you might pull the upset. But then the rest of your verse was much weaker. The sitting on coach play was OK at best. The straightforward disses weren't personal. The closer was OK but generic. Allen Knight: The Tony Parker line slayed me, especially since the Spurs' system is nicknamed "48 Minutes of Hell." The Hall & Oats line was OK at best, but it was a good concept that needed further exploration. The opener and closer were your weakest lines, which I can't remember ever seeing in a verse, but that's what happens in a keystyle. You left the door open for oats, but the Tony Parker line really connected for me. Vote: Allen Knight __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

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