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01-08-2014, 10:01 PM
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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Karaoke came pretty decent here. So did Phuck.
I want to startby saying I read Karaoke's first, then Phuck. Karaoke had some little zingers here and there. The Geno one was pretty funny. The main thing here is relevant consistency. He dropped a few relevant factors tying into this week, which made it that much more effective. The lines he didn't drop that, were still pretty decent, making an overall good verse! Phuck had a different approach and a more global structure. By that, he referenced a few things, 3D/Carrie. Those were ok, and the rest were just personal jabs that couldve been worded and thought out better. The match in itself was cool, but there's a clear winner here. What I'd recommend is just word things better. Sometimes I feel you guys are just trying to tell half somewhat witty puns but leave out a lack of wording by doing so. I know wording isn't really thaaaaaaat prominent in these short battles but i'd like seeing it done. Vote - Kar
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