Swag&Flow FPS Braggado. (Multi-practice)

jdeek · 01-08-2014, 02:12 PM

i agree with zyg here...i don't think i've read anything else from you...but i will look for something else. s&f braggo made me open this...but it seems like you were trying too hard for the multis...s&f should be direct and hard hitting, at least that's how i view it...and this didn't really draw me in or keep me interested too long...it seems like you know what you're doing...just trying too hard here...i'll look for something else...but like dude said...let it come naturally...keep writing

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01-08-2014, 02:12 PM	#7
jdeek Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 21 Rep Power: 0	i agree with zyg here...i don't think i've read anything else from you...but i will look for something else. s&f braggo made me open this...but it seems like you were trying too hard for the multis...s&f should be direct and hard hitting, at least that's how i view it...and this didn't really draw me in or keep me interested too long...it seems like you know what you're doing...just trying too hard here...i'll look for something else...but like dude said...let it come naturally...keep writing