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Whats good, Fly, came to return the favor.
This piece read a lot like the last one i read from you (that one piece in the RIA league about your place in the topical writing circle). Allow me to get this part out of the way...why do you "/" the end of every line? that's mad newbish son, lol!! Anyways, i dig this piece for what it is. Basically a topical braggadocio piece haha. To piggyback on Vulgar's comment, there were some flash of brilliance but i also see some rust there. Heavily metaphor laced, i can't say fully understand some of the symbolism but i did suspect a scathing commentary on the power-that-be within the first few bars. Quote:
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So word, as a "yall better recognize my talent" piece, i thought it was an enjoyable read. Not one of your best but still enjoyable. Keep on. |
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