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01-05-2014, 06:22 PM
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Razor-thin derision
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,422
Battle Record: 40-25
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Nice writing overall, I like how you make braggadocio sound casual. Accomplishing the approach without turning the volume up so high or beating the war drum phonetically.
Favorite part: "My style is precise at catching errors like a tax assessor. This is task force Kappa Delta - we’re reading active sensors in the Alpha sector, wait Zygote has escaped, activate all Satnav antennas." lol |
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