bitches drive me crazy and i write shit like this

Natural · 12-26-2013, 10:55 PM

This was mechanically(technically) good. It seems like you were just trying to tell the tale without boasting all of you're prowess....which is fine....but it leaves a lot less room for criticism to be honest.
All I can really say is that it did its job and the mechanics behind it are smooth.

I would like to see you really test you're abilities though.
Anyway. Stay scribing.

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12-26-2013, 10:55 PM	#5
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 659 Rep Power: 0	This was mechanically(technically) good. It seems like you were just trying to tell the tale without boasting all of you're prowess....which is fine....but it leaves a lot less room for criticism to be honest. All I can really say is that it did its job and the mechanics behind it are smooth. I would like to see you really test you're abilities though. Anyway. Stay scribing.