AOWL WK 3: Frank (2-0) VS. Zenland (1-1) [FRANK WINS, 7-1.]

Mike Wrecka · 03-03-2013, 07:44 PM

zenland - solid drop. good mechanics. good take on the concept. read like a tongue twister in spots. which was cool.

frank- extremely creative idea. and very well executed. I got sick of it quick though. it got repetitive. I just wish you wrote half the verse like that and the other half in your normal style. iono.

overall- franks extremely awesome concept against zens short but well flowing verse. zen if you wrote more I would have given it to you but it felt underwhelming because of the briefness of it. frank your concept wins the day.

vote-frank

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03-03-2013, 07:44 PM	#1
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	zenland - solid drop. good mechanics. good take on the concept. read like a tongue twister in spots. which was cool. frank- extremely creative idea. and very well executed. I got sick of it quick though. it got repetitive. I just wish you wrote half the verse like that and the other half in your normal style. iono. overall- franks extremely awesome concept against zens short but well flowing verse. zen if you wrote more I would have given it to you but it felt underwhelming because of the briefness of it. frank your concept wins the day. vote-frank