Damsel. (Director's Cut w/ Alt Ending)

[e11even]

Awesome feed Certain. My constraints were line limit and time management as they always are in my case. I wasn't able to plan it correctly due to my still very flawed brainstorm process. All my thoughts rush in at once. This verse was meant to carry more and be more complete; satisfying even.

Amy is the girl's real name. Glenda is the personality Ben was married to, a naive young woman who appears to have had a wholesome, sheltered upbringing. She represents the younger, pure side of Amy.

Cheryl is the sum of all Amy's imperfections; the reason they're divorced. It was supposed to come out in the end, but I never rewrote this for OM. I just posted the original intended version. The body in the closet was the receptionist from Ben's dealership. The O'Malley girl happened to catch the murders in progress and got the brunt of it.

The bible verse was about infedelity(Ben) and jealousy(Amy).
The 'bag of shoes' was Glenda's way of explaining her personality disorder.

Beginning to the middle was intended to be set in 1958. The end just unraveled. My inspiration was the series of murders commited in that decade span 55-65, hence the names and a few other details I failed to explore. I hope this clears up some things.