The Last Leaf.

[Frank]

Whattup? It's Frank. I haven't had a chance to comment on your shit for some time now. Last piece I remember reading of yours under the lexicon mantra was "life of eye". Creative writing, still resonates with m because of the attention to detail, mainly format and structuring. This makes your work quite distinguishable. I was looking for a leaf shape to magically appear but it never happened. I think you have the skill to take format structuring to the next level. You set the bar high with " i" Now I expect every piece to have a symbolic shape or I feel as though you should just type your verse out regular and leave the centering and funny font alone.

I enjoyed the oak desk line as well as the early morning fiasco line.

Good to see you around, Keep writing