Lucid.

[Mael]

Intentional hokum. Welcome to the club. This was pretty cool, the flow was excessive due to the length of your lines.

punch Mona Lisa in the cunt to finish the painting.

lolwut..

symbol of simple laughter in the middle of last/first. Little extravagant fiddilin' with my cash purse. Silk pillows slick as my black shirt. Pistol blasts in spurts.

Nice.

As most of these guys said, the structure was a bit off at times. Standard format works better for most of us, unless you're Void.

Good read, mate.