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Fire. Once I began, I read this at a very fast pace and it worked well. Explosive and flexible rhyme schemes careened this one from beginning to end. It kind of reminded me of an Eminem flow experiment, then you mentioned him at the end so it was a semi-confirmation that his exploits inspired yours.
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