.:: I'm not a person you fix ::.

Vulgar · 12-07-2013, 12:37 PM

Hah, this was good to me. Flawed in some ways yet full of personal touch. It reminded me of something I'd be reading in 2005 on Rapflava back in the day.

I wake up in my boxers with jizz, it isn't a shocker, it is
the lonely and jerked urban version of a personal diss,
I'm not only hurt - turban-wearing murderers aint shit, I'm not a person you fix;
I'm the mixed version of Kurt Cobain with bits of Durden, bourbon and Kiss.
^'I'm not a person you fix' has an undeniable musical quality to it that I would probably say made the piece authentic.

Keep doing you

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12-07-2013, 12:37 PM	#7
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	Hah, this was good to me. Flawed in some ways yet full of personal touch. It reminded me of something I'd be reading in 2005 on Rapflava back in the day. I wake up in my boxers with jizz, it isn't a shocker, it is the lonely and jerked urban version of a personal diss, I'm not only hurt - turban-wearing murderers aint shit, I'm not a person you fix; I'm the mixed version of Kurt Cobain with bits of Durden, bourbon and Kiss. ^'I'm not a person you fix' has an undeniable musical quality to it that I would probably say made the piece authentic. Keep doing you