The Realest Shit I Ever Wrote: Pt 2.

[Natural]

You see this lump in my hands, or are you totally blind?
This bitch is pregnant, and I don't even know if its mine
What a tangled webb, broken design, cause in my heart
I know i don't care for the kid and I could just burry the bitch
The adversary she is, need an axe -pole, or capsule in'er mouth
I wanna end their fucking lives, there's no shadow of doubt
I'm sorry -I blacked out, i really think that I'm losing my mind
The picture just doesn't quite describe this illusion of time
Knowing I was stupid inside, way I lift her legs and slayed
I fucked her once for every page in the fifty shades of grey


↑ I had to change and add words....but the above is an example of a better structure.
I changed illusion of mine to illusion of time only because you've already used mine
as an end rhyme in the drop. However the word "mine" would still be fine structure wise.
Compare the two. Food for thought.