LuminoCITY [MUSIC VIDEO]

e11even · 11-25-2013, 05:25 AM

I think for you to have helmed this on your own was cool.

I'm not gonna do a Vulgar breakdown, but I will say that this song as a breakout song would be a bad fit. IMO this would be better as an album/mixtape filler. If mainstream is you target audience, you might wanna go for a little less grungy, a little more bass, and a better hook definitely. The video just lacked better imagery and imagination. The combo of music with video didn't really match to me. I like your flow tho. Just try to be above mainstream status quo.

Just think: So many people are doing audio. Wat makes you different? Capitalize on that.

Nice work overall. I should start making videos. BTW where in NC? I just left in July.

Edit: I see you're from Raleigh. Is this song poppin off out there?

11-25-2013, 05:25 AM	#8
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	I think for you to have helmed this on your own was cool. I'm not gonna do a Vulgar breakdown, but I will say that this song as a breakout song would be a bad fit. IMO this would be better as an album/mixtape filler. If mainstream is you target audience, you might wanna go for a little less grungy, a little more bass, and a better hook definitely. The video just lacked better imagery and imagination. The combo of music with video didn't really match to me. I like your flow tho. Just try to be above mainstream status quo. Just think: So many people are doing audio. Wat makes you different? Capitalize on that. Nice work overall. I should start making videos. BTW where in NC? I just left in July. Edit: I see you're from Raleigh. Is this song poppin off out there? __________________ Ahem. Last edited by e11even; 11-25-2013 at 05:28 AM. Reason: added text.

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