Week 9 - Mr. J (5-3) vs. NYCSPITZ (3-3) - NYCSPITZ WINS 8-0

breathless · 11-24-2013, 08:27 PM

Nyc, your language is amazing, and the way you used so much of the specifics of the picture in a controlled way really shows some talent, although, not much creativity as for taking the topic somewhere special. But still, real nice

J, this was very interesting lyrically, almost a harmonic dissonance in the odd syllable fillers amongst the multis, done with a consistency that made it work rather than just sound choppy. But even with that being said, there wasn't anything that especially stood out wordwise, had you gone off with incredible multis or something it may have turned out in your favor since you gave a slightly more creative take on the topic

Vote - NYC

11-24-2013, 08:27 PM	#10
breathless Master of Beastiality Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Lansing, Mi Posts: 368 Battle Record: 4-6 Rep Power: 0	Nyc, your language is amazing, and the way you used so much of the specifics of the picture in a controlled way really shows some talent, although, not much creativity as for taking the topic somewhere special. But still, real nice J, this was very interesting lyrically, almost a harmonic dissonance in the odd syllable fillers amongst the multis, done with a consistency that made it work rather than just sound choppy. But even with that being said, there wasn't anything that especially stood out wordwise, had you gone off with incredible multis or something it may have turned out in your favor since you gave a slightly more creative take on the topic Vote - NYC __________________ I used to be amazing... http://soundcloud.com/dancourser/sets

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