Ryan 12 vs Mordycai (topical) - RYAN WINS

Geno · 11-19-2013, 06:33 PM

Mordycai has potential.
I felt he was really off mechanically and strayed conceptually as well.
The rhymes were very basic and have been done time and time again. I can't honestly say that I really saw anything in this verse that was entirely original.

Ryan had the shorter bars and more well timed rhymes with a better grasp of where he was heading conceptually. Stayed on point more and could even note some some originals ideaas in the verse.

Gotaa vote
Ryan

11-19-2013, 06:33 PM	#11
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Mordycai has potential. I felt he was really off mechanically and strayed conceptually as well. The rhymes were very basic and have been done time and time again. I can't honestly say that I really saw anything in this verse that was entirely original. Ryan had the shorter bars and more well timed rhymes with a better grasp of where he was heading conceptually. Stayed on point more and could even note some some originals ideaas in the verse. Gotaa vote Ryan __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

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