WK2: Malachi (0-1) VS. Coup (0-1) [COUP WINS, 9-0.]

[Frank]

Coup.

Strong showcase. You came through with the slippery tongue and had a mid-evil feather pen with you by ya bedside while you wrote this. It was mythical and had a barbaric poetic writers voice. Not so smooth but you almost talked like a elegant warlock. Some quotes.

Tears of peppermint trace my cheek down fields of rye
Wet yellow poppy scent, toxins turn the wheels of sky

in between a gulf is fixed, an invisible memo of strife

This was good work and it had a different language about it that resonated amongst the meager half-wits or tally wag dabbles. Keep doing what your doing. Only get even more physcobabble ya feel me

Malachi.

Hahahahahahahahahaha. Mind-contro last bar. Thats what the picture had you thinking you was trippin when you wrote that weren't you yo this shit is gonna fool somebody? yo... you sgot self esteem issues, you didn't need to undermine what you had just written because it was cool. It was fresh so keep writing and I think this emilys second appearance? she was in last weeks drop, but yo keep writing and don't sell your self short, write a little more each time. some quotes.

He gave her heartless instructions for disruption so he could rise from the dungeons.
"Kill everything that's thrived, thats been alive and I want it done by Day 1 not day 5.

overall.

this was a pretty epic battle in a contained way. both writers are well on their way and have their strengths. this was a good read for me and I thought it was close but coup had the dagger out.