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11-13-2013, 12:39 AM
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Agreed, thought it was dope. Thought some of the sentences seemed rather choppy, but not a huge problem to the overall impression of your verse. Enjoyed the at times sporadic flow as if it was mirroring you in distress, it's unintentional but that's how I perceived it while reading it. Thought it was a cool drop, keep it up.
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