Week 7 - Mike Wrecka (2-4) vs. Zenland (2-4) - MIKE WRECKA WINS 7-1

ThisisDAM · 11-10-2013, 12:19 AM

Okay. First read of this paragraph form, don't like it. Although. I think if mastered completely, it would be great. I liked the verse tho, it seems you do have skill & I can sense it. With this one I couldn't get into it like I wanted to. Mike had a decent verse, I like your style actually. Only nitpick the ending didn't feel complete. It needed more in the middle. I'm sorry to cut this short, but I'm way too exhausted to detail. I give this to Mike

11-10-2013, 12:19 AM	#7
ThisisDAM Significance over Purpose Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: nYc Posts: 141 Battle Record: 3-2 Rep Power: 38	Okay. First read of this paragraph form, don't like it. Although. I think if mastered completely, it would be great. I liked the verse tho, it seems you do have skill & I can sense it. With this one I couldn't get into it like I wanted to. Mike had a decent verse, I like your style actually. Only nitpick the ending didn't feel complete. It needed more in the middle. I'm sorry to cut this short, but I'm way too exhausted to detail. I give this to Mike __________________ Twitter - @ThisisDAM

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