Week 7 - Vulgar (3-1) vs. Pancakebrah (3-1) - PANCAKEBRAH WINS 8-1

[Mike Wrecka]

sick battle. props

pancakebrah - when I assigned this topic to you guys it was at random. and when I set the thread I really wondered, what the fuck could someone do with this pic. I would have struggled with it. you took it and ran. really created a dope concept here. two people that have never met taking a pic to represent African americans in the ghetto at this time period. maybe all you wrote is true. maybe you researched the picture and its all true. I don't know and im not taking the time to find out, im just gonna take the verse for what it is. if it isn't a true story its a testament to your wit and storytelling that Im considering that it might be. really enjoyed it. if you didn't throw in the they just met briefly after the guy asked for a cigarette part it wouldn't have been nearly as effective. its kinda of like peoples paths cross all the time, sometimes they interact and in this instance they were frozen in time together. intriguing. the writing was well, vulgarish. I think you had so much vulgar on the mind you sub consciously channeled his essence. it was longer bars than I usually read from you. and that to me is vulgary. but you brought your signature storytelling and vivid imagery. I felt like I was there, I saw the sights, I heard the sounds, I smelt the smells. that's your gift. and its a good one. mechanically it wasn't incredible but it was very very good. but that is to be expected in a story. it was complex however and that was appreciated. I did get a slight chop here and there. very slightly though. great stuff


Vulgar - vulgar you described each person to us in a way that was similar to what Ghostface does. using random phrases and linking them together in a way that seems cohesive. it was fun to read. it just was a little too abstract for me. .

Helterskelterishfeelings when pelting shellfish skeletons
on a belt called the paleolithic coefficient crescent
boast a smith&wesson to hold a pilgrim's essence in hand

helterskelterishfeelings when pelting shellfish skeletons? man I don't know what that means. your stuff is over my head. dumbing down verses in order to reach more people is something I actually work hard at. consider it. dont get me wrong this would sound amazing on a track. and would be a phenomenal OM. and is a very dope topical for this league. but your opponent brought a more cohesive and interesting telling that your lyrical acrobatics couldn't overcome. insane vocab though. as always. props my friend.


vote - pancakebrah