ever after

Mr. J · 11-07-2013, 07:57 PM

I missed the whole battle situation, regardless this was dope
I felt if you stuck it out more you could have, would have won
I remember the whole thing being close, you did a great job regardless
I'm not sure if this was the whole piece or if it has it's parts edited out
but you did a great job with the topic given regardless...dope drop
towards the end it started to mesh together very nicely...
I didn't enjoy the opening though :(...keep writing breh

11-07-2013, 07:57 PM	#9
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	I missed the whole battle situation, regardless this was dope I felt if you stuck it out more you could have, would have won I remember the whole thing being close, you did a great job regardless I'm not sure if this was the whole piece or if it has it's parts edited out but you did a great job with the topic given regardless...dope drop towards the end it started to mesh together very nicely... I didn't enjoy the opening though :(...keep writing breh __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

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