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CopyPat · 10-30-2013, 12:42 PM

eh it was ok, i'll give u props for saying whats on ur mind and getting the content in, but scheming wise u are capable or so much more. to me this was more a little poem rather than a display of ur rhyming capability. 2 word rhymes do nothing for me.. this shit is grade 1 level pick ur nose shit, nahhhhhhmean??? aha, i just know u can do way better, i want to see u give a fuck about trying to scheme some crazy shit, i think it'd be dope to see, give er a go. i'de even collab with u if u wanna learn from the greatest ahah jk, i would never collab with u cause u suck. jk i was actually jk about pretending to be the best, lets collab, hit me with an idea or verse when u down, aha stay posting bodey

10-30-2013, 12:42 PM	#7
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	eh it was ok, i'll give u props for saying whats on ur mind and getting the content in, but scheming wise u are capable or so much more. to me this was more a little poem rather than a display of ur rhyming capability. 2 word rhymes do nothing for me.. this shit is grade 1 level pick ur nose shit, nahhhhhhmean??? aha, i just know u can do way better, i want to see u give a fuck about trying to scheme some crazy shit, i think it'd be dope to see, give er a go. i'de even collab with u if u wanna learn from the greatest ahah jk, i would never collab with u cause u suck. jk i was actually jk about pretending to be the best, lets collab, hit me with an idea or verse when u down, aha stay posting bodey __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

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