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Razor-thin derision
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4,422
Battle Record: 40-25
Accomplishments - OM HOF
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lol this was quite entertaining. I didn't think you would keep my attention the whole way through but you did. Very creative concept and smooth execution. You were almost non-chalant with the way you told the story, rarely (if ever) faltering. When I saw 'meat, meets machine' I almost laughed out loud. Cyborgs for the win.
"I compose 20 luminous bars to entrap humanity in a large prison feeble key-styles can't decipher you back to the star systems harvesting harder wisdom, darker visions through unholy communions screw your crew then, a union of humans is simply a fusion of mutants consumed by toxic fumes, fuck these imprudent pollutants doomed from womb to tomb enslaved from cradle to grave grave danger as I spit lethal infrared phrases erasing any trace of the crazed and deranged" ^This was like listening to Canibus while drinking vanilla Pepsi. Fresh. Keep doing it |
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