Week 4 - patrown (2-1) vs. Mr. J (2-1) - MR. J WINS 5-0

Mike Wrecka · 10-19-2013, 07:03 PM

cool battle guys. quickie votes. sorry

Mr. J - good flow. you went really vague . like I didn't know what the fuck I was reading about vague. Im assuming you were personifying wind and describing yourself with those terms. kind of like a flex piece. like I said the flow was good and you had some stand out lines.

patrown - what you wrote was good. you just didn't write enough to get my vote. you are the biggest grammar Nazi I have ever seen when you vote. well at one point you used the word suit instead of soot. and that made me smile knowing that I could rag on you for it. good verse just too short

vote - Mr. J

10-19-2013, 07:03 PM	#8
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	cool battle guys. quickie votes. sorry Mr. J - good flow. you went really vague . like I didn't know what the fuck I was reading about vague. Im assuming you were personifying wind and describing yourself with those terms. kind of like a flex piece. like I said the flow was good and you had some stand out lines. patrown - what you wrote was good. you just didn't write enough to get my vote. you are the biggest grammar Nazi I have ever seen when you vote. well at one point you used the word suit instead of soot. and that made me smile knowing that I could rag on you for it. good verse just too short vote - Mr. J __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

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