WK1: Split (0-0) VS. Malachi (0-0) [SPLIT WINS, 6-0.]

[veritas]

Split...it appeared to me that you are trying to hard, no hate at all homey, but that is how it came off to me. Your story was hard to follow, but after a second read i got, so that is saying something. OVerall you appear to have an understanding of rhyming words, and you told a somewhat captivating story.

Mal: yo man, you seemed to just have half-assed this. The topic you chose had mad potential, and I felt like you didnt even try. I know you can roll harder than this homey.

Overall I would rather read a complicated, hard to follow piece, than a piece that was half-assed and simple....

mvgt split.