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10-17-2013, 07:49 PM
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The Clown Prince
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I really can't tell who is who on this one...
but I am familiar with both of you, it's a fun read though the vibe you deliver is somewhat, bi-polarish it seems like it's one mind writing ambidextrous I felt after the first half of the first verse was done the rest just seemed to flow together...the last verse was cool I don't know what that middle part was doing there but it blended it together in some weird, weird way... dope drop though fellas
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