Week 4 - symetrik (0-0) vs. breathless (0-2) - BREATHLESS WINS 6-2

Mr. J · 10-15-2013, 11:09 AM

This was a cool battle short and sweet from both
basically came with the same idea and type of storyline
Tackling the subject differently at the same time
the execution from both writers was quite the same as well
looks like you two could have collabed on this piece
I enjoyed symetricks verse. the visuals were placed well
breathless seems to be experimenting with this style
but as close as you two were on this I feel....
well...I feel breathless did quite well so my vote is in his favoring

10-15-2013, 11:09 AM	#6
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	This was a cool battle short and sweet from both basically came with the same idea and type of storyline Tackling the subject differently at the same time the execution from both writers was quite the same as well looks like you two could have collabed on this piece I enjoyed symetricks verse. the visuals were placed well breathless seems to be experimenting with this style but as close as you two were on this I feel.... well...I feel breathless did quite well so my vote is in his favoring __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

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