Sure.

Inno · 10-13-2013, 03:04 PM

this was different than anything ive read from you.

its not scattered..

its not jumbled...

its..

its fucking chalked full of that poetic vibe i dig so much..great word use man..i mean
great fucking word use through out this entire piece. and tbh honest as i finshed reading
this...its exactly like your style...yet it seemed controlled..man i would love to see you
develop this style a bit more..i think the abstract nature of this style allows you to be
that scattered brain idea man while still delivering that imagery and depth that is needed
to put together a well written story or theme...great stuff man really enjoyd this piece
in every aspect.

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10-13-2013, 03:04 PM	#8
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,026 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	this was different than anything ive read from you. its not scattered.. its not jumbled... its.. its fucking chalked full of that poetic vibe i dig so much..great word use man..i mean great fucking word use through out this entire piece. and tbh honest as i finshed reading this...its exactly like your style...yet it seemed controlled..man i would love to see you develop this style a bit more..i think the abstract nature of this style allows you to be that scattered brain idea man while still delivering that imagery and depth that is needed to put together a well written story or theme...great stuff man really enjoyd this piece in every aspect.